For Halloween I have to work all night, 6-11, which won’t be
very fun but I’ll get over it. Tonight I’m hoping to carve a pumpkin and then
after work tomorrow I might get together with some friends and just hangout,
but for now I just have to work :P
The stories I read were all very good, and very different
from one another in a way. Marrissa E had two stories. One about a grave yard,
which had a hanging ending which I liked and another one about a Jack O
Lantern. Jessica had a story about going to the pumpkin patch with her sick
sister which I liked a lot. I liked the descriptive words and phrases she used
throughout the story. The last line is definitely a great way to end her story.
Collin’s story was definitely one of my favorites. It was so well written with dialogue
and descriptive gory details. Ashley’s story was about a paranormal spirit
waking her up in the middle of the night and she has a conversation with it. I
liked this story because she was the narrator and she was not innocent, like
most protagonists in scary stories.
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